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Winter Is around the Corner

Helen Huang – the ninth grader

 

Winter is around the corner. Recently we can see people started to wear coats or heavy clothes. It is getting colder and colder and the wind blows hard. Also, many fruits, like oranges, are for sales. It’s a symbol of winter. In the morning, I don’t feel like getting up because my bed is too warm to leave. The winter reminds that this year is about to end. I like winter, the season of beauty.

 

 

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Winter Is around the Corner

Helen Huang – the ninth grader

 

Winter is around the corner. Recently we can see people start to wear heavy coats or thick clothes. It is getting colder and colder and the wind blows hard. Also, many seasonal fruits, like oranges, are for sale. It’s a sign of winter. In the morning, I don’t feel like waking up because I am too warm in my bed to get up. The winter reminds that this year is about to end. There is no burning sun in winter. But it has a blue and clear sky which makes me feel calm and peaceful. I like winter, the season of beauty in my heart.

 

 

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