台北新竹英文家教

英文寫作– Friendship

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Friendship

Simba Chang – the eighth grader

There are various emotions in the world.  People need valuable emotions which can support your life and mind.  Friendship is one of the most necessary emotions.  It is not easy to deal friendship.  Sometimes you and your friend may meet quarrel.  Trust is the best way to solve it and it also can let your friendship last forever.  If your friend makes a mistake accidentally, you should give him some chances and forgive him.  Friendship is too precious that we have to pay many efforts to protect it.  A life without a friend juts likes a life without a sun, so we should not give up friendship easily.  Friendship is the most important thing in everyone’s life.

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Friendship

Simba Chang – the eighth grader

Friendship is one of the most precious assets in our life.  With friends around us, we will feel happy.  Otherwise, we will be lonely.  We know very clearly it is not easy to maintain friendship when there are quarrels or conflicts happening to us and our friends.  However, trust is the best way to deal with the problems arising from the above.  In addition, trust can let our friendship last forever.  If our friends make mistakes accidentally, we should give them chances to get back in track.  Friendship is so precious that we have to put a lot of efforts to treasure it.  A life without friends is just like a rose without the sun.  So we should not impair friendship or lose it.  Keep it in our heart.