學測指考英文寫作– Forgot to Turn off the Faucet (by 9th grader)

 

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Forgot to Turn off the Faucet

Simba Chang – the 9th grader

 

Phil got up late in the morning. He left home in a hurry and therefore forgot to turn off the faucet. Phil drove very fast, his speed was much higher than the limit speed. Finally, he arrived at the office and attended the meeting on time. In the meeting, he didn't focus on what his boss said because he thought there was something wrong in this morning. After working hard all day long, he came home and opened the door. The water spilled from the house. He was shocked and suddenly remembered what he forgot to do. Phil couldn't help but recover his house although he was tired out.

 

 

[ 修改後 ]

Forgot to Turn off the Faucet

Simba Chang – the 9th grader

 

Although there was a meeting this morning, Phil got up late. Without having breakfast, he left home in a hurry, and therefore forgot to turn off the faucet. He drove his car at the speed which was much higher than the speed limit. Finally, he arrived at the office, entering the conference room before the meeting started. In the meeting, always thinking there was something wrong at home, he couldn't focus on what his boss said. After working hard all day long, he dragged his tired body home. When opening the door, the water poured from the house. He was shocked and suddenly remembered what he forgot to do this morning. As tired out as he was, Phil couldn't help but clean up his house.

 

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