學測指考英文寫作– A Bag Full of Money (by 12th grader)

 

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A Bag Full of Money

Julie Chen – the 12th grader

 

On a narrow alley was a dingy-looking noodle stand. Although it wasn't easy to find the stand, many customers came because of delicious food. One day, when Tom's mother was going to close the stand, a man came in and ordered a bowl of noodles. The man wore a formal suit holding a big bag. He sat next to Tom who was waiting for his mother to go home together. Tom was curious about the big bag, so he stopped writing homework and asked the man what was in the bag. He didn't answer the question, and finished the meal quickly. Then he took a taxi and left in a hurry. When he arrived at the train station, he found he left the bag in the noodle stand. In the stand, Tom and his mother found the big bag on the chair. They opened it to find some clue about the man. To their surprise, in the bag was a lot of money. They called the police to deal with this bag. At the same time, the man went back to the noodle stand. Police looked at the man carefully and found he was the bank robber. He arrested the man and thanked to Tom and his mother. After this event, bank decided to show their grateful to Tom's mother. They found Tom's family wasn't rich, so they paid Tom's all school fees until he graduated from high school. Tom and his mother were so happy that they embraced in tear.

 

 

[ 修改後 ]

A Bag Full of Money

Julie Chen – the 12th grader

 

On a narrow alley was a dingy-looking noodle stand. Although it wasn't easy to find the stand, many customers still came to have their meals there because of its delicious food. One day, when Tom's mother was going to close the stand, a man came in and ordered a bowl of noodles. The man wearing a suit and holding a big bag looked a bit nervous. He sat next to Tom who was waiting for his mother to go home together. Curious about the big bag, he stopped doing homework and asked the man what was inside the bag. The man didn't answer Tom's question. Instead, he finished his meal quickly. Then he hailed a taxi and left in a hurry. When arriving at the train station, he found he left the bag in the noodle stand. At the same time, in the stand, Tom and his mother saw the big bag on a chair. In order to know what was inside the bag, they opened it. To their big surprise, the bag was full of money. They called the police to deal with it. A few minutes later, the man went back to the noodle stand looking around. The police showed up looking at the man carefully and found he was the bank robber they were looking for. He was arrested immediately. The police was grateful that Tom and his mother reported it to them. After this event, the bank wanted to show their gratitude to Tom's mother, but found her family wasn't in good condition. So they decided to pay all the tuition fees for Tom until he graduated from senior high school. Tom and his mother were so happy that they embraced each other in tears.

 

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