學測指考英文寫作– Forgot to Turn off the Faucet (by 10th grader)

 

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Forgot to Turn off the Faucet

Hunter Wang – the 10th grader

 

One day, Phil was going to be late for the meeting at the office in the morning. So he washed his face, brushed his teeth quickly and then went to the meeting. But he didn't find that he forgot to turn off the faucet. When Phil was in the meeting, he always thought that he forgot to do something. After a whole day's work, Phil felt tired, and he just wanted to take a shower and sleep. He opened the door, and a lot of water came pouring out of home. Suddenly he remembered what he forgot to do in the morning. Phil couldn't help but drag the tired body to clean it.

 

 

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Forgot to Turn off the Faucet

Hunter Wang – the 10th grader

 

One day, Phil was going to be late for the meeting at the office in the morning. So he washed his face, brushed his teeth and then went to the meeting as quickly as possible. But he didn't find that he forgot to turn off the faucet in the bathroom. When Phil was in the meeting, he always thought that he forgot to do something. After a whole day's work, Phil felt tired, and he just wanted to take a shower and sleep. When he stood in front of his apartment, he opened the door. To his surprise, a lot of water came pouring out of his apartment. Suddenly he realized that he forgot to shut down the water in the morning. Worn out and sleepy, Phil couldn't help but clean the mess.

 

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