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學測指考英文寫作 – Chased by a Dog (by 11^th grader)

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Chased by a Dog

Yoyo Ke – the 11^th grader

One day, the man who is afraid of big dogs was on his way home. He found something was following him so that he observed the creature carefully. However, when the wolf dog greeted the eyes, he could not calm down. Screaming and running away, he made the dog startled. The dog began to run after the man and constantly bark at him. The man kept running until he arrived his home. To avoid the dog catched up with him, he opened the door immediately. Suddenly he felt something bitting off his leg. How harmful it is! He cried out instantly and then woke up from the horrible dream. It was lucky that the pain was made by himself because he kicked the wall unconsciously instead of bitting by a dog.

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Chased by a Dog

Yoyo Ke – the 11^th grader

One day, a man afraid of big dogs was on his way home. He found something following him so he turned and looked back. However, the wolf dog greeted him with its fierce eyes, which made him very nervous and frightened. When he screamed and ran away immediately, it started barking and running after him. He kept running until he reached the front door of his house. To avoid being caught up with the dog, he opened the door as quickly as possible and was in an attempt to rush into the house. But he felt painful and thought one of his legs was bitten by it. Crying out loud and waking from the horrible dream with a start, he felt so lucky that the pain was made by himself because he gave the wall a hard kick unconsciously instead of being bitten by the wolf dog.