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學測指考英文寫作– A Blessing Disguise (by the 10^th grader)

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A Blessing Disguise

Peggy Wu – the 10^th grader

One day, Betty and Alan drove the 12 year-old-car to supermarket. On the way to it, the old guy suddenly stopped and couldn't use again. They moved it to a side of the road, and tried to fix it. After 11 times trying, the car still didn't want to be awoke. When they were worried about the date at afternoon, a scooter rider appeared like an angle. He made the engine work again, and tough them how to do it. Betty and Alan felt so thankful to him that they want to open a vehicle shops 20 years later, "B & A" becomes the biggest shops around the world. That's the story why they want to open shop.

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A Blessing Disguise

Peggy Wu – the 10^th grader

One day, Betty and Alan drove their 12-year-old car to a supermarket. On the way, the old car suddenly stopped and couldn't move. They pushed it to the roadside, and tried to fix it. After more than 10-time trying, the car still stayed there. When they were worried that they might not make it to the appointment in the afternoon, a scooter rider appeared like an angle. He made the engine work again, and taught them how to do it. So thankful for him that they thought they could invite him as one of partners to run an auto shop to fix and repair cars which were driven by people everywhere. Ten years later, Best Friends Auto Shop run by them becomes one of large companies in Taiwan. Till now, all of them can't believe yet their fruitful result is owing to such a chance coincidence they had years ago.