學測指考英文寫作 – A Car Broke Down (by 9th grader)

 

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A Car Broke down

Simba Chang – the 9th grader

 

Last week, a mother and her son called Betty and Alan drove to the market. Suddenly, the care extinguished fire. Betty stopped her car at the side of the road. Betty and Alan tried to fix the broken car, but they didn't know anything about car fixing, what's worse; the market were going to close. After few minutes, a scooter driver saw they were in a trouble. He drove to them to give them a hand. He was working in a motorcycle store, so he was very practiced. He fixed it in a moment and let the engine work again. He sweat a lot because of fixing their car, but he didn't ask for reward and left quickly. Betty and Alan appreciate him a lot. They said thank you to him loudly when he drove away.

 

 

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A Car Broke down

Simba Chang – the 9th grader

 

On a hot evening last week, Betty drove her car to a supermarket to buy some necessities with her son, Alan. On the way, the car broke down unexpectedly. It was parked at the roadside and Alan was asked to fix it if he could. But he didn't know anything about how to fix a car; what was worse, the supermarket was going to close. After a few minutes, a heavyweight motorcyclist passing by found they were in trouble, stopping over, and making a spontaneous offer of help for he was a mechanic working at an auto shop nearby. Due to lack of regular maintenance, it took him a while to fix Betty's car and let the engine ran again. Sweating a lot because of the hot weather, he didn't ask for any labor charge and left quickly. Betty and Alan appreciated his help very much. They kept saying "thank you" to him even when he was about to ride his chopper away.

 

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