學測指考英文寫作 – A Dream - 2 (by 10th grader)

 

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A Dream (by 10th grader)

Ting Lee – the 10th grader

 

Everyone should have a dream. A dream can encourage me to do the things I couldn't do before. A dream can inspire me to try new things. I have a dream. I wish I can be a doctor in the future. I know it is not an easy thing, but I want to try my best to make it come true. For the dream, I lost my free time because I have to study harder and harder. I'm not a smart guy, and ofcors I'm not very good at study. But, for my dream, I want to try. I don't know whether I can success or not. But, if I don't try, I can get nothing. This is I do for my dream. I don't think that I lost so much. Without the dream, I'll still waste my time in any other things, which unuseful for my life. A dream, it can change our life. It can give us a direction to go through our own life. 

 

 

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A Dream (by 10th grader)

Ting Lee – the 10th grader

 

Everyone is supposed to have a dream in his or her life, and I am no exception. A dream can encourage me to do many things I couldn't do before, and inspire me to try new things in the future I long for.

 

As for my dream, I hope I can be a doctor. Although it is a difficult and painstaking task, I want to try my best to make it come true. To realize my dream, I'm sure to lose my free time because I'm required to study even harder than before because it is worth doing. In front of me, there will be a lot of uncertainties in the coming future. I don't know whether I'll succeed or not. I may become an ordinary person if I don't give it a try. That is, I'll waste my time as usual doing other things which are useless or fruitless in my life. However, if I strive for it, aside from nothing to lose, I may achieve my goal. A dream, practical and meaningful, can change my life, and give me a direction to fight for my promising future.

 

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