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學測指考英文寫作 – A Dream - 6 (by 12^th grader)

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A Dream (by 12^th grader)

Helen Huang – the 12^th grader

The cool water flowed beside my limbs. I swam a bit closer to the colorful coral reefs, appreciating the length and the huge size of a red coral. All of sudden, a large amount of tropical fish gathered around me and quickly vanished in seconds, like a smoke melted in the dark sky. Unpredictable as the mysterious creatures, I captured the scence with my water-proof camera, making it another eternal memories of me.

I have a dream, a dream that has fascinated me a few years ever since I watched an documentary introducing the life of a sea photographer. The unique work place and the extraordinary experience to work with marine creatures completely enchanted the child who has long fonded with the ocean. Even though the opinion from my parents have been always more pessimistic than optimistic, I still keep the dream secretly in the depth of my mind. Though it seems that I am further and further away from it as I grow older, the wonderful dream will certainly accompany me forever, no matter as an urge to motivate me or as a spurt of fountain refreshing my spirit whenever I feel depressed.

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A Dream (by 12^th grader)

Helen Huang – the 12^th grader

The cool water flowed beside my limbs. I swam a bit closer to the colorful coral reefs, appreciating a red brilliant and humongous coral. All of sudden, a large school of tropical fish gathered around me and quickly vanished in seconds, like a smoke swiftly disappeared in the dark sky. Unpredictable as the mysterious creatures, I captured the scenes with my water-proof camera, making them another eternal memory of mine.

I have a dream, which has fascinated me for a few years ever since I watched a documentary introducing the life of an underwater photographer. The unique work place and the extraordinary experience to work and play with marine creatures completely enchanted the child who had long been fond of seas and oceans. Even though the views from my parents have been always more pessimistic than optimistic over my picturesque dream, I still keep it a secret in the depth of my heart. In a way, it seems that I am farther and farther away from it as I grow older. Nonetheless, the wonderful dream, either in the form of an urge or a spurt out of fountain, will certainly accompany me forever to motivate and refresh my spirit whenever I feel depressed. This is my inspiring dream.