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學測指考英文寫作 – Social Networking Sites (by 12^th grader)

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Social Networking Sites (by 12^th grader)

Cherry Lee – the 12^th grader

Nowadays, social networking sites, such as Facebook and Tweeter, are a necessary part in our life.  Not only can they connect people from all over the world, but they also can share a variety of informations instantly.  As a result, social networking sites are deeply loved by modern people.

Everything has its pros and cons, not except for social networking sites.  Using the Internet, we can’t avoid our individual informations from leaking.  Moreover, we can’t assure the friends we make on the sites are trusty.  Because those messages they show might be fake, we can’t help but to be careful every stranger on the Net.  The last but not least, social networking sites are likely to be a way to commit a crime.  Fraud and cheat are the first people we need to be alert.

Despite the fact that social networking sites amuse us, they also conceal several dangers in it.

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Social Networking Sites (by 12^th grader)

Cherry Lee – the 12^th grader

Nowadays, social networking sites, such as Facebook and Tweeter which are two of the most famous ones, are indispensable parts in our daily lives.  Not only can they help their users connect people from all over the world, but they also can let them share a variety of information instantly.  As a result, social networking sites are deeply loved by modern people.

Everything has its pros and cons, and these sites are no exceptions.  Despite the fact that they can amuse and entertain us, a lot of danger and dishonesty are concealed on these platforms.  Using the Internet, we can’t avoid our personal information from leaking.  Moreover, we can’t assure ourselves friends we make on the popular sites are trustworthy because the messages and pictures they post and update might be fake. Therefore, we can’t help but to be careful to deal with the stranger on the Net.  The last but not least, social networking sites are likely to be very easy and convenient for the evildoers to do whatever and whenever they want to, even commit crimes.  Bear in mind that frauds and cheats might be around us, and keep our eyes open and wide whenever and wherever we use these fabulous social networking sites to do our browsing and writing.