學測指考英文寫作 – My Favorite Advertisement

 

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My Favorite Advertisement

 

Advertisements have invaded in our lives for decades and have become commonplace and ubiquitous in our surroundings.  Of all the ads I have seen, a car commercial I watched on TV a few years ago still remains the most impressive as well as my favorite one.  At the beginning of the ad, a little boy was tucking things that he treasured the most into a backpack.  After that, he sneaked out of his house for fear that he wakened his parents, and set out on his journey in the late night.  After the boy had walked for a long distance, he came to his destination, which astonished me a lot, the police office.  It turned out that all effort he made was just for a ride of the police car to bring him home!

 

The reason the ad impressed me so much came for two reasons.  First of all, not unique as it is to promote an ad by a story, the car commercial did stand out among others by an appealing and professional filming skill.  So exquisite and creative was the ad that I could hardly get my attention off the story.  Secondly, the ending was surprising because it seemed to be documentary at the beginning, which even gave the story a few humor when realizing the reason of the boy's little travel.  The ad really left a deep impression on me, also serving as an oasis of joy every time I think of it.

 

 

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My Favorite Advertisement

 

Advertisements have invaded our lives for decades and have become commonplace and ubiquitous in our surroundings.  Of all the ads I have seen, a car commercial I watched on TV a few years ago still remains the most impressive as well as my favorite one.  At the beginning of the ad, a little boy was tucking things that he treasured the most into a backpack.  After that, he sneaked out of his house for fear that he wakened his parents, and set out on his journey in the late night.  After the boy had walked (for) a long distance, he came to his destination, which astonished me a lot, the police office.  It turned out that all effort he made was just for a ride of a police car to bring him home!

 

The reason the ad impressed me so much came for two reasons.  First of all, not unique as it is to promote an ad by a story, the car commercial did stand out among others by an appealing and professional filming skill.  So exquisite and creative was the ad that I could hardly get my attention off the story.  Secondly, the amazing ending was pretty fascinating and somewhat warming because it seemed to be documentary at the beginning.  However, not until the end of the ad would the audience know what it wanted to tell them.  Moreover, it even gave the story a little humor when realizing the reason for the boy' travel.  The ad really has left a deep impression on me, also serving as an oasis of joy every time I think of it.

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