學測指考英文寫作 – To Be a Great Person or an Ordinary Person (by 12th grader)

 

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To Be a Great Person or an Ordinary Person (by 12th grader)

Ting – 12th grader

 

It is believed that being a great person is a dream for many people because they can experience a variety of challenges and have a colorful life.  However, it can be not only stressful but also lonely.  For me, instead of being a great person, it will be pleased to be an ordinary person.

 

Nevertheless, it doesn't mean that I can't be a person like a great person who helps others.  I want to be an ordinary person, but can act like a great person.  For example, I would like to contribute myself to the poor or those who need help without the knowledge of other people.  For me, I don't have to be a person who can the entire world.  Instead, I just want to be a person who can control my life, and make my best effort to help others.

 

Whether we are a great person or an ordinary person, the most important is to enjoy our lives and do the things you want to do.  As for me, it will be freer and easier to be an ordinary person.

 

 

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To Be a Great Person or an Ordinary Person (by 12th grader)

Ting – 12th grader

 

It is believed that being a great person is a dream for many people because they can be well-known to the public or even to the whole world.  In addition, they can experience a variety of challenges and may have a colorful life.  However, it is said that it can be both stressful and lonely.  For me, rather than being a great person, like the majority, it will be happier or easier to be one of ordinary individuals.

 

Although I like to be an ordinary individual, it doesn't necessarily mean that I can't be a person like a great man or woman who helps others.  In my plan, if possible, I can not only want to be an ordinary person but also act like those great guys.  In reality, I enjoy contributing myself to the poor or those in need without the knowledge of other people.  I know clearly that it'll be hard for me to be somebody who can change the entire world.  Instead, I just want to be a responsible person in my family, my society, and my country.

 

To put it simply, whether we are great or ordinary people, most importantly, we should be useful guys, enjoy our lives, and do the right things.  As for me, it will be sure to make me live a happy life.  

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