學測指考英文寫作Sleep Is Important  (by 7th grader)

 

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Sleep Is Important (by 7th grader)

Michelle – 7th grader

 

When sleeping, you can have your body take a rest and repair itself.  It can give you good health and make you energetic and active.  If you don't have enough sleep, you might get sick because of not having sufficient energy.  In order to be healthy, you must get a good sleep everyday.

 

People are likely to have pressure from their daily life.  In addition, it is common that modern people oftentimes stay up late.  This is a kind of pressure from their job.  This bad habit needs to be gotten rid of, because if you don't, the disease will creep up to attack you one day.  Sleep is important to everyone.  Now, go home and have a good sleep on the bed!

 

 

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Sleep Is Important (by 7th grader)

Michelle – 7th grader

 

When sleeping, we can have our body take a rest and repair itself.  It can give us good health and make us energetic and active.  If we don't have enough sleep, we might get sick because of not having sufficient energy.  In order to be healthy, we must get a good sleep every day.

 

Modern people are likely to have pressure from their daily lives.  In addition, it is common that they oftentimes stay up late.  This is a kind of pressure from their work.  This bad habit needs to be gotten rid of, because if them don't, diseases will creep up to attack them one day.  Sleep is important to everyone.  Now, go home and have a sound and deep sleep on the bed!

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