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學測指考英文寫作A Thank-You Letter to Your Parents (by 12th grader)

 

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A Thank-You Letter to Your Parents (by 12th grader)

Peggy Wu – the 12th grader

 

Dear Dad and Mom,

 

Recently, a coming important exam makes me very stressful, so I often talks to you in a bad attitude.  Also, I have less time than before chatting with our family.  In spite of what I have done rudely and intemperately, you still support me as much as you can.  However, all I can do is just study hard to repay what you have done for me, and I, by this letter, convey how thankful I am.

 

Every word you have said I have remembered and it indeed help me fight for this exam.  A hug and a kiss you give me every night before I sleep make me confront every hard challenges.  So, no matter how busy we are, don’t forget the night kiss and your loving daughter always being with you.

 

Your loving daughter,

Peggy

 

 

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A Thank-You Letter to Your Parents (by 12th grader)

Peggy Wu – the 12th grader

 

Dear Dad and Mom,

 

Recently, a coming important exam makes me very stressful, so I often, with bad attitudes, talk to you.  Also, I have less time than before chatting with you and other members of our family.  In spite of what I have done rudely and intemperately, you still support me as much as you can.  However, all I can do is just study hard to repay what you have done for me, and I, by writing this letter, convey how thankful I am.

 

I remember every word you have said, and it indeed helps make great strides and fight for this exam.  A hug and a kiss you give me every night before I sleep make me confront every hard challenge.  So, no matter how busy you are, don’t forget the warm and caring hug and kiss.  I’ll be always with you. 

 

Your loving daughter,

Peggy

 

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