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英文寫作 – A Dream (a freshman in university)

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A Dream

Paul Ho – A freshman in university

A Dream

It is said that everyone has a great and wonderful dream in their mind. For those who work hard, their ceaseless effort will pay off.  When they realize their dreams some day, they are sure to be excited and happy.  On the contrary, for those who are not diligent, their dreams are nothing but day dreams.  Moreover, it is believed that they will be destined to be losers if they are used to being unoccupied and lazy.  Eventually, what they can do is, with reluctant smiles on their faces, envy their friends whose dreams come true.

As a freshman in our society, my dream is to work smart to be a capable and versatile white-collar worker.  I can make a living by myself, and years later, I will have my own family and children.  I will definitely dedicated myself to doing what I am committed to in the hopes of being a loving and considerate husband as well as a caring and competent father one day.

In the process of fulfilling the goal, ahead of me, there will be a variety of obstacles, difficulties and setbacks that may make me hesitant, frightened, disappointed and frustrated.  Instead of retreat, all of these will train me and make me grow.  In the predicable and foreseeable future, I'll end up an experienced, mature, and dependable person.

[ The above writing is a very good example for those who are eager to learn something from English Writing.  I haven’t made any modifications to it. ]