學測指考英文寫作 – New Year’s Resolutions (by 12th grader)

 

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New Year’s Resolutions (by 12th grader)

Helen Huang – the 12th grader

 

With the approach of the New Year, the days left in this year are getting fewer and fewer.  There are several plans I have determined to fulfill in the coming year, with the most significant and despering one, going on a trip in Taiwan on my own, ranking on the first place of the list.

 

Being not a relaxing vacation but an educational and meaningful experience for me, traveling around the island myself is anything but a easy task.  For instance, it requires me to look up for all the informations before I make up a plan, including finding accommodations and transport ways.  Even though I will have got everything prepared, unpredictable conditions are still likely to occur, which will force me to figure out solutions independently to the accidents.  Challenging as the trip seems, I will certainly learn a lot afterwards, not to mention broaden my horizon and be more independent.

 

 

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New Year’s Resolutions (by 12th grader)

Helen Huang – the 12th grader

 

With the approach of the New Year, there are several things I am determined to fulfill in the coming year.  The most significant one on the list is to go on a trip around the island on my own, which is what I have been desperate to do for years.

 

Not a relaxing vacation but an educational and meaningful experience for me, traveling around Taiwan myself is anything but an easy task.  For instance, I'm supposed to look for all the necessary and related information before I come up with a plan, including hotel accommodations and transportation maps.  Even if I have everything prepared, unpredictable conditions are still likely to occur, which will force me to figure out how to deal with them independently.  Challenging as the trip seems, I will certainly learn a lot afterwards, not to mention broadening my horizons and being more mature.

 

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