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學測指考英文寫作 – Future World (by 12^th grader)

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Future World (by 12^th grader)

Kevin – the 12^th grader

Everyone should have many imagination to the future world, and so do I.  We might saw something incredible like under ground cities, robots, and out space trip from si-fi movie.  Maybe it will realize in someday, but in my opinion, the most advanced thing in future is the Internet.

The advancement of the Net going fast in recent year.  Because of its convenience, we reply on it very much in our lives.  If it keep going like this, all of our life may connect on the Net in future, for example, we won’t go to school but learn at home from the Internet.  Although it is seen to be convenient, we should learn how to make best use of the Internet first.

In the future world, I think we all should equip the knowledge of the Internet and know how to adopt the Internet life, or else we might be replaced by robots and become nobody in the future.

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Future World (by 12^th grader)

Kevin – the 12^th grader

Everyone have a lot of imagination of the future world, and so do I.  According sci-fi movies, we can see something incredible like underground cities, robots, and trips to outer space in the future world.  Maybe all of them will become true someday.  In my opinion, the most amazing thing in the future is the Internet.

In recent years, the Internet and the related technology have achieved considerable and impressive progress, which leads to a better life we can live.  The more convenient and comfortable our lives are, the more we rely on them.  If it keeps going like this, all of our daily activities will be connected to the Net in the future.  For example, we’ll learn almost everything online rather than go to school.  Although our future world will become cozier, as the Internet users, we must want to learn how to make best use of it first.

In the future world, even complicated things will become easier.  We’ll engage in more activities and move forward faster.  So, in order not to be obsolete in the future, at the moment, we need to be equipped with the Internet know-how and help ourselves adapt to our future lives in our future world.