學測指考英文寫作 – A Dream - 4 (by 12th grader)

 

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A Dream (by 12th grader)

Cherry Lee – the 12th grader

 

Since I was young, I usually dream to be a teacher.  Because teachers are sign of power and the students have no choice but follow the words said by teachers.  However, becoming a senior high school student, I completely change my mind that being a teacher in the future.  Moreover, I think being a people who can travel around the world is an interesting dream.  Not only can I learn deeper about the foreign history or stories, but also can meet more friends coming from all over the world.  As a result, this is the dream I wish I could done in the future. 

 

To coming true a dream is likely to be a difficult job.  But doing nothing can't get near to the dream.  Rather than planing a bluemap in your mind, taking action is more important.  For me, in order to come true my dream, the first step is to save the money.  Without money, I  

 

 

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A Dream (by 12th grader)

Cherry Lee – the 12th grader

 

Since I was young, I have usually dreamed of being a teacher.  It is because teachers are a symbol of power and students have no choice but to follow what they are told by teachers.  However, becoming a senior high school student, I completely change my mind and decide not to be a teacher any more.  Instead, I think being a person who can travel around the world is an interesting dream.  Not only can I learn something in depth about other countries' cultures and histories, but I also can make more friends coming from all over the world.  As a result, this is the dream I want to realize in the future. 

 

Making my dream come true is likely to be a difficult task.  But having a dream without doing anything or taking any action is meaningless and insignificant.  It is nothing but a daydream.  In order to achieve my dream, the very first step is to save money.  With enough money in my pocket, I can travel wherever I want to go.  What a wonderful dream!

 

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