學測指考英文寫作 – The Cellphone in Our Daily Lives

 

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The Cellphone in Our Daily Lives

Yo Yo Ke – 11th grader

 

Nowadays, we can see most of people using cellphone everywhere and anytime. For instance, a group of friends go out to have a lunch, but everybody just play the own game or use app with cellphone. No one talk to each other. Just using the app LINE to chat, they forget to build a real social ability in real -life. People lose the capability to contact with new friend and become more and more lonely so that we afraid to make friends. What a serious problem. Experts say that we just put cellphone down and start to chat with other, which may make out relationship better than before. Just ask for direction instead of using Google Map. Let's start to repair our social ability now.

 

 

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The Cellphone in Our Daily Lives

Yo Yo Ke – 11th grader

 

Nowadays, we can see a lot of people use cellphones anytime and anyplace. For instance, a group of friends hang out to have a lunch gathering, but instead of have a wonderful chatting among them, everybody just play games or use apps on their cellphones. No one wants to talk to each other. They would rather use an app called LINE to chat with their friends familiar and unfamiliar on line, even including some friends sitting in front of them, and obviously, they forget to socialize with these friends in their daily lives. People lose the capability to contact and get along with others, and become more and lonelier so as to be afraid to make friends in public or person. Without any changes made, it will end up a serious social problem. As some experts suggest, the best way people can do is to put their cellphones asides and start to chat with others, which can restore the ability they had before and make up for their lack of social activities like asking anyone nearby for directions rather than using Google Map. Let's start to repair our social skills now.

 

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