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學測指考英文寫作– The Cellphone in Our Daily Lives (by 9^th grader)

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The Cellphone in Our Daily Lives

Tammy Lai – the 9^th grader

With more and more technology are universal, we can find hardly the person who doesn't have a cellphone on the street. Cellphones have many advantages. For instance, cellphones breaks up the limit for time and space so that we can use them whenever we are. In addition to this, we can record some interesting or important things happening in our daily lives with cellphones. Thank to cellphones, they make our lives become colorful and convenient. Although they have many advantages, they also have drawbacks. People talk to others face-to-face; instead we use cellphones to communicate. It leads to that relation between people will become thinner and thinner. When we are using cellphones, what we need to remember is that electronic products can't take place of interpersonal contact.

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The Cellphone in Our Daily Lives

Tammy Lai – the 9^th grader

With more and more technology commercial and universal, we hardly can find a person who doesn't have a cellphone on the street. Cellphones have many advantages. For instance, they break the limits for time and space so that we can use them whenever or wherever. In addition, with these small gadgets, we can record some interesting or important things happening in our daily lives. Thanks to them, our lives become more colorful and convenient. Although they have many advantages, at the same time they have drawbacks. Instead of talking to others face to face, a majority of communication done by us go through these powerful devices. It leads to a weird situation where we lack a precious ability to make our social skill function properly, which is a kind of shame on us. Therefore, when we are using these hi-tech products, what we need to keep in mind is that even newly-released smartphones like iPhone 6 and Sony Xpeira Z3 can't take the place of one of human being's nature - communication with others face to face.