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學測指考英文寫作 – The Pleasure of Helping Others (by 12^th grader)

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The Pleasure of Helping Others (by 12^th grader)

Cherry Lee – the 12^th grader

When it comes to helping others, we will associate with volunteers without a second thought.  All of their work are find someone in need and giving a favor to them.  Not getting any material profit, volunteers feel delighted and satisfied in return.  For me, I have several experiences as a volunteer not only in school but also outside the school.  Despite the fact all I do is nothing but a simple task, such as copying documents, delivering papers, tidying up the surrounding, I will full of accomplishment and happiness after doing these works.

If there were no mutual help among us, the world would become much boring.  Everyone won't call others for help and connect with people less.  Moreover, we won't know how pleasure helping others is and how kind the people are.  As the result, helping others is the key to make the world wonderful and great.

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The Pleasure of Helping Others (by 12^th grader)

Cherry Lee – the 12^th grader

When it comes to helping others, we will associate it with volunteers without a second thought.  Volunteers' work is to help people in need without getting any material reward, and volunteers feel delighted and satisfied.  As for me, I have done a lot of volunteer work not only in school but also after school.  Despite the fact all I did was nothing but some simple tasks, such as copying documents, delivering papers, tidying up the surroundings, I was full of accomplishments and happiness after finishing these tedious and trivial things.

If there were no mutual help among us, we would become indifferent and the world would turn out to be cold.  If it really happens, everyone won't call for help from others and communicate with each other less.  What's worse, we won't know how pleasurable helping others is and how kind people are.  What a misery!  Therefore, we know helping others is the wonderful and great thing, and it is the key to making the world harmonious and peaceful.