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學測指考英文寫作 – Humans and High Technology (by 12^th grader)

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Humans and High Technology (by 12^th grader)

Winnie Fu – 12^th grader

Since the invention of computers, human life has changed a lot.  With the advancement of high technology, our life becomes convenient.  We can do many things without going outside.  For example, we can shop online to buy fresh meals, movie tickets, fashionable clothes and so on.  What's more, we can do work at home without going to the office often.  According to the above-mentioned, we can see humans rely on high technology so heavily and deeply.

The examples described above are on the positive side when people use high technology.  However, using high technology has negative impact on us.  Using computers and smart phones for a long time will severely damage our eyesight and harm our back and wrist.  If we just use these small devices to communicate with other people, we will lose our social ability.  We know that machines with computers have replaced a lot of manpower already in factory.  High technology brings our life both good and bad, but no one knows how and what high technology will be in the future.

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Humans and High Technology (by 12^th grader)

Winnie Fu – 12^th grader

Since the invention of computers, human life has changed a lot.  With the advancement of high technology, our life becomes convenient.  We can do many things without going outside.  For example, we can shop online to buy fresh meals, movie tickets, fashionable clothes and so on.  What's more, instead of going to the office often, we can do plenty of work at home.   According to the aforementioned, we can see humans rely on high technology so heavily and deeply.

The examples described above are on the positive side when people use high technology.  However, using high technology has negative impact on us.  Using computers and smart phones for a long time will severely damage our eyesight and harm our back and wrist.  If we just depend on these small devices to communicate with other people, we will lose our social ability.  We notice that varieties of machines with computers have replaced a large amount of manpower already in factories. 

High technology brings our life both good and bad, but no one knows how and what high technology will be in the future.  There is one thing we are sure of is that high technology has become necessary in our life.