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英文寫作 – Summer Vacation Is about to End

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Summer Vacation Is about to End

Hunter Wang – the ninth grader

There is only one week which is left before summer vacation is over. In this summer vacation, I have studied a lot of things that I learned before. I had many classes every day, and I had many kinds of homework. When I finished the weekly homework, I just want to relax and play computer games. But my mother always thinks I don’t study enough. She will turn off my computer and asks me to study more. I thought I still can’t relax in the last week of this summer vacation. It was the most terrible summer vacation I have ever had.

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Summer Vacation Is about to End

Hunter Wang – the ninth grader

There is only one week left before summer vacation is over. In this summer vacation, I have studied a lot of new stuff and reviewed what I learned in the last two years. In addition, I had many classes at a cram school every day and many kinds of homework. When I finished the weekly homework, taking a break, and playing computer games, my mother turned off the computer and asked me to study more because she always thought I didn’t study hard enough. I wondered whether I could relax in the last week of this summer vacation. But I definitely know it is the most terrible summer vacation I have ever had.