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學測指考英文寫作 – A Day without Cellphones (by 11^th grader)

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A Day without Cellphones (by 11^th grader)

Simba Chang – the 11^th grader

A day without a cellphone may be uncomfortable to modern people because they are addicted to it. They can’t bear not to check messages immediately or not to play cellphone games. For me, I just use cellphone to play games most of the time. I won’t spend too much time on it except it meet my interest so much. But I think it is necessary for us to spend a day without cellphone. We can’t always be bond with 3C product On that day, you can exercise, read novels, or develop your interest. You can also walk around and see the scenery. You may think the world is different because your sight is not limited by the small screen any more. Although a day without cellphoe will be painful at first, it is worth trying.

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A Day without Cellphones (by 11^th grader)

Simba Chang – the 11^th grader

A day without cellphones may be uncomfortable and inconvenient to most of modern people because they have become addicted since the small gadgets became popular years ago. They can’t bear not to check incoming messages in minutes or not to play cellphone games. For me, I just use my cellphone to play games most of the time, and I won’t spend too much time on it unless the game draws a lot of my attention. But I think it will be beneficial and necessary for most of the people to spend a day without cellphones since they can’t occupy themselves with their cellphones and be tied up with other 3C products all the time every day. On that day, they can exercise, read novels, or explore their interest. Moreover, they can also go hiking enjoying the scenery around in the morning, spend a whole afternoon with their families, and watch movies with their friends at night. Suddenly, it seems the world is quite different from what is expected to be because their sight is not confined to the small screen any more and their mind travels freely. Although a day without cellphones will be painful at first, it is worth doing even for more than one day.