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Better Left Unsaid

Tommy Lee – the twelfth grader

 

If I am possible to trace back to any time and leave unsaid a saying what words do I want to be unsaid? I think that I have said millions and billions of words, and there are many of them I want to leave unsaid. But it can just choose one of them, so I decide to choose a saying which is the most terrible thing I have said when I was in an elementary school when I was grade five. I told the whole class about a girl named Molly who liked a friend of mine wrote a love letter. Molly stood up and latter ran out the classroom with tears. Afterward, I am so regretful that even now, I can’t forget Molly’s horrible stare and tearful face. I think that I have done a mistake which can’t be forgiven. If I had been capable of going back to the time, I would have left my silly words unsaid without doubt.

 

 

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Better Left Unsaid

Tommy Lee – the twelfth grader

 

If it is possible to go back to the time and leave my words unsaid, what words do I want to be unsaid? I think that I have said tons of words, and there are many of them I want to leave unsaid. But if I just can choose one of them, I will choose the most terrible one which I said when I was in grade five. It was that I pleasingly told the whole class about a girl named Molly writing a love letter to a friend of mine who she liked. I thought it was fun. However, Molly stood up, bursting into tears, and running out the classroom. At that time I realized I really did harm to her. Afterward, I have been so regretful that even now, I can’t forget Molly’s horrified stare and tearful face. It has been an awful mistake which can’t be forgiven. If I had been capable of going back to that very moment, I would have left my silly words unsaid without a doubt.

 

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