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My Dream
Peggy Wu – the ninth grader
When I am young, I want to be a teacher because I thought the teachers are very important for a county. A good teacher could turn a student into a successful people on society. But now I didn’t think that. My dream is turning because I think the teacher need lots of patience to teach student. My disposition didn’t matching it, so I keep looking for my dream that I really want and agree with in my life.
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My Dream
Peggy Wu – the ninth grader
When I was in elementary school, I wanted to be a teacher because I thought teachers are very important to a county. A good teacher could turn a common student into a successful person in a society. But now I don’t think I can make it. My dream changes because I think a teacher needs lots of patience to teach students. My disposition makes me not fit to be a teacher, so I keep looking for my dream that I really want in my life.