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英文寫作 – A New Season after a Cold Winter

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A New Season after a Cold Winter

Simba Chang – the eighth grader

This winter I feel is very cold. Spring is a good season if you compare it with winter. I am glad that spring is coming because I don’t have to wear heavy coats and many clothes. The weather in spring is great. It is always warm and sunny. Trees and flowers are starting to grow. When I see plants are luxuriant, I will feel happy and comfortable. Spring lets me feel more and more energetic every day because of its fresh air, wonderful temperature and breeze. These are the reasons that why do I love spring so much. I think I will enjoy this spring.

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A New Season after a Cold Winter

Simba Chang – the eighth grader

I feel that this winder is very cold. Spring is a good season if we compare it with winter. I am glad that spring is coming because I don’t have to wear heavy coats and a lot of clothes. The weather in spring is great. It is warm and sunny most of the time. Trees and flowers are starting to grow. When I see plants become greener and greener, I feel happy and comfortable. Spring lets me feel more and more energetic every day because of its fresh air, wonderful temperature and light breeze. These are the reasons why I love spring so much. I think I will enjoy this spring delightedly and joyfully.