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英文寫作 – My Bad Habit

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My Bad Habit

Helen Huang – the ninth grader

My bad habit is lazy. I always don’t want to get up early on weekends. After a tiring week, all I want to do is to relax and sleep. Therefore, I usually get up late and even miss lunch time.

Recently, I’ve realized that my bad habit makes my life become more boring. Because of it, I miss many things which I like. Also, I’ll get bad grades if I don’t feel like doing homework.

I decide to change this bad habit. From now on, I’ll be more hard-working and get up earlier in the morning. If I do so, I believe my life will be more interesting.

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My Bad Habit

Helen Huang – the ninth grader

My bad habit is laziness. I always don’t want to get up early on weekends.  Because of it, after a tiring week, all I want to do is to relax and sleep. Therefore, I usually get up late and even miss my lunch time.

Recently, I’ve realized that my bad habit makes my life become more boring because I have missed many things which I like. Also, because of it, I don’t feel like doing homework, which might make me get poor grades.

Hence, I decide to get rid of this bad habit. From now on, I’ll be more hard-working and get up earlier in the morning. By doing so, I think I’ll not only get better grades but also lead an interesting life.