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英文寫作 – Do You Like Changes

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Do You Like Changes

Jerry Han – the twelfth grader

Someone says that practice makes perfect, but to me, change makes perfect. Only through continuous try and making a progress step by step can we get closed to perfect. Obviously, I belong to those who like changes. Even on my way home, I always try my best to walk different roads to make my life full of new things.

With this personality, I always squeeze my brain to think about how I could get the thing done in a more efficient way. For example, when I solve a math problem, I always want to come out another easier way. And this trait also makes my life more challengeable and interesting at the same time.

However, this personality doesn’t always do good to my life. Standing in front of a shelf containing lots of sandwiches in a breakfast store, I usually choose different kinds of sandwiches everyday because I expect all the time a new one will be better. Nevertheless, sometimes I feel disappointed because not only the tasty but also the terrible might be chosen.

Changes are not so much a personality of mine as a way I enjoy my life. In this changing world, if we don’t change and always keep ourselves in a circle, we’ll be knocked down by the trend of the world.

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Do You Like Changes

Jerry Han – the twelfth grader

Some say that practice makes perfect, but some say that changes make perfect. Only through continuous trials and making progress step by step can we get closed to perfection. Obviously, I belong to those who like changes. Even on my way home, I always try my best to walk different routes to make my life full of new things.

With this personality, I always rack my brain to think about how I could get the thing done efficiently. For example, when I solve a math problem, I always want to come out an easier way to solve it. And this trait also makes my life more challengeable and interesting at the same time.

However, this personality doesn’t always do good to my life. In a breakfast store, standing in front of a rack with lots of sandwiches on it, I usually choose different kinds of sandwiches everyday because all the time I expect a new one will be better. Contrary to my belief, sometimes I feel disappointed because not only the tasty but also the terrible might be chosen.

Changes are not so much a personality of mine as a way I enjoy my life. In the ever-changing world, if we can’t adapt to changes and always choose to stay in the old rut, we’ll be knocked down by CHANGES one day.