學測指考英文寫作– The Frog Prince (by 9th grader)

 

[ 學生原作 ]

The Frog Prince

Tammy Lai – the 9th grader

 

Polly is a cute and innocent girl. She is used to read some stories to cheat the time. Her favorite stories are about fairy tales or stories for children. She always thinks that she is a princess who has lots of money and a pretty face. One day, she bumped into a frog in her yard, "Frog prince" story came to her mind. She dreamed that the frog could turn into a handsome prince, so she put the frog close her lips and kissed it! After home, her mom looked surprised at Polly's lips and said, "What happened with your mouth? There are bubbles on your lips!" To play it safe, her mom took her to the doctor. He asked her what she had done, she was so embarrassed that her behavior. Up to now, this event is still deep in her heart.

 

 

[ 修改後 ]

The Frog Prince

Tammy Lai – the 9th grader

 

Polly is a cute and innocent girl. She is used to reading some stories to cheat her time. Her favorite stories are about fairy tales or children's books. She always wishes that she were a pretty princess who were born in a royal family.  One day, she bumped into a frog in her yard. The story of "The Frog Prince" came to her mind. She dreamed that the frog would be turned into a handsome prince if it could be kissed by a beautiful princess. So she held the frog close to her lips and kissed it! But nothing happened. Feeling puzzled and disappointed, she stayed outside for a while and went into the house. At sight of her lips, her mom was surprised to say, "What happened to your mouth? Your lips swell up. It seems there is bubble gum on them." To play it safe, her mom took her to see the doctor. At the clinic, the doctor asked her what she had done. She was so embarrassed that she didn't let him know about her childish act. Up to now, it still has stayed deep inside her heart.

 

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