學測指考英文寫作– The Frog Prince (by 10th grader)

 

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The Frog Prince

Peggy Wu – the 10th grader

 

A lovely girl, Polly, who likes to read at story books as her pastime. She usually imagines that she is a princess and there is a handsome prince nice to her. One day, she saw a frog sleeping in her hard, it reminded her of a story of "The Frog Prince." She caught the frog and wanted to kiss it. Suddenly, a eminently boy stopped her from kissing the sleeping frog and asked what she was doing. Polly felt embarrassed and put down the frog. Then, the nice boy asked her for a date which made her think of the prince in the story. She finds it hard not to believe that he is the prince, so she accepted him happily.

 

 

[ 修改後 ]

The Frog Prince

Peggy Wu – the 10th grader

 

A lovely girl, Polly, who likes to read story books as her pastime. She usually imagines that she is a princess and there is a handsome prince nice to her. One day, she saw a frog sleeping in her hard, which reminded her of a story of "The Frog Prince." She caught the frog and wanted to kiss it. Suddenly, a nice looking boy stopped her from kissing the sleeping frog and asked what she was doing. Polly felt embarrassed and put down the frog. Then, the boy asked her for a date. It made her think of the prince in the story. She found it hard not to believe that he was the prince, so she accepted his invitation happily.

 

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