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學測指考英文寫作– A Busy Job (by 12^th grader)

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A Busy Job

Julie Chen – the 12^th grader

In the big and beautiful restaurant were many people enjoying their meals. There were still many customers waiting beside the door. Kim, as a waitress in the restaurant, was very busy. It is not only because the restaurant was filled with customers but also because there weren't enough waiters. In the giant restaurant were just three waiters so Kim had to do many things. Therefore, she should do everything as fast as she could. Because she wanted to do her best, she forgot to pay attention to surroundings, and then the accident happened. When she brought a bowl of soup to a lady, two children were running and playing in the restaurant. Suddenly, they rushed toward Kim. It was too late when she found it. The soup splashed on a man's head. He was so angry that he shouted at KIm loudly. Parents of the naughty children are also scold their kid. Hearing the noise, the manager came. After he knew about why the accident happened, he decided to use Kim's salary to indemnify the man for his clothes. Besides, he told all parents to take care of their kids. Don't let them play in the restaurant. Kim felt so sad that she couldn't get the money she earned by hard working.

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A Busy Job

Julie Chen – the 12^th grader

Enjoying their meals in a big and well-decorated restaurant were a lot of people. There were still many customers waiting in line outside. Kim, a waitress in that restaurant, was very busy because of too many customers and lack of employees. In order to do as many things as she could, she didn't pay too much attention to her surroundings, and something happened. When she brought a bowl of soup to a lady, two children running and playing around, rushed toward her. She moved backward swiftly and immediately to avoid them which made the soup fall down on a guest's head. He was so angry that he shouted at Kim loudly. At the same time, parents of the naughty children were also scolding their kids. Hearing the noise, the manager came to the guest and said sorry. After he knew why the accident happened, he decided to use Kim's salary to indemnify what the guest suffered. Besides, he told all the parents to take good care of their kids and not to let them play in the restaurant. Hard as she worked, she couldn't get the money she earned. Frustrated and sad, she made up her mind to find another job.