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學測指考英文寫作– A Day in an Amusement Park (by 9^th grader)

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A Day in an Amusement Park

Tammy Lai – the 9^th grader

One day, a couple went to an amusement park for fun. Because it was on holiday, there were lots of people there. Although they spent a long time waiting for each ride, they still feel happy and excited. At first, they had some simple easy rides, for instance, merry-go-round and so on. They had a good time playing and riding in the morning. After lunch, the girl begged the boy to ride the roller coaster with her, but her boyfriend was afraid of it. In order not to let her disappointed, he barely nodded his head. While the roller coaster became higher and faster, his face was scary white. After getting off it, he vomited immediately. And his girlfriend felt sorry for him.

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A Day in an Amusement Park

Tammy Lai – the 9^th grader

One day, a couple went to an amusement park for fun. Because it was a holiday, the amusement park was filled with lots of people. Although they spent a long time waiting for each ride, they still felt happy and excited. At first, they had some simple easy rides, for instance, merry-go-round and so on. They had a good time playing and riding in the morning. After lunch, the girl begged the boy to ride the roller coaster with herb, but her boyfriend was afraid of it. In order not to let her disappointed, he barely nodded his head. While the roller coaster ran faster and climbed higher, his face turned scary white. The moment he got off it, he vomited. And his girlfriend felt sorry for him.