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學測指考英文寫作 – The Cell Phone in Our Daily Lives (by 10^th grader)

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The Cell Phone in Our Daily Lives

Helen Huang – the 10^th grader

There are several advantages in cell phones, which indeed make our lives more convenient. With a cell phone, we can connect with others wherever we are, especially when we are in emergencies. Besides, being able to surf the Net with a smart phone, we can do lots of things, such as looking for information or checking e-mails. Despite of the advantages cell phones contain, they may still lead to some troubles. There are more and more people being addict to smart phones. They look at their phones all the time, even when having a date or a meal with their friends. Worst of all, the addictions may lose their friendships or time if they don't stop staring at their phones. What we can't forget is that electronic devices can never replace the contact between people, so we need to use them properly.

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The Cell Phone in Our Daily Lives

Helen Huang – the 10^th grader

There are several advantages our cell phones have while we use them, which make our lives more convenient indeed. With a cell phone, we can communicate with others wherever we are or whenever we use it, especially in case of emergency. Besides, being able to surf the Net with a smart phone, we can do lots of things, such as looking for information or checking e-mails. Despite the advantages a cell phone has, it may lead to some problems we are faced with now. For example, there are more and more people being addicted to smart phones. They look at or phub their phones all the time, even when having a date or a meal with their friends. Worst of all, such a serious addiction may cause them to lose their friendship or waste their time. We all know there are still many things which are more important than our cell phones. The only thing we want to bear in mind is to use cell phones properly and smartly and don't let them dominate us.