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學測指考英文寫作 – The Marriage from Two Countries (by 10^th grader)

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The Marriage from Two Countries

Helen Huang – the 10^th grader

Foreign marriages are more and more common nowadays. There are many reason why the number of foreign couples increase. Not only the ways to go abroad but also the chances to work in foreign countries is getting more, which makes people consider about working abroad if the salaries or the working environments are better than those in their natural countries. Once they are in a foreign country, they may get used of living there or even find a husband or wife. There's nothing wrong with foreign marriage. However, it may bring about some problems, such as cultural differences. At first the couple may not notice the differences in their daily life, while as the time become longer, their habits or thoughts may lead to arguments. No matter how difficult it is to get used to the different cultures, as long as we keep an open mind, it will be easier for us to decrease the problems.

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The Marriage from Two Countries

Helen Huang – the 10^th grader

The marriage from two different countries is more and more common nowadays. There are many reason why the number of the marriage is on the increase. Not only the ways to go abroad but also the chances to work in foreign countries is varied and popular, which makes people take working abroad into consideration if salary or working environment is better than that in their own countries. Once they are in a foreign country, they may get used to living there or even find a husband or a wife. There's nothing wrong with the intercultural marriage like this. However, it may bring about some problems, such as cultural differences. At first, the couple may not consider the differences in their daily life so important or crucial, while as the time goes by, their dissimilar habits or thoughts may lead to arguments or quarrels. No matter how difficult or arduous it is to get used to the different cultures, as long as they keep an open mind, it will be easier for them to overcome the problems in front of them.