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學測指考英文寫作 – If I Won a Lottery Prize (by freshman)

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If I Won a Lottery Prize

Jerry Han – the freshman

If I were lucky enough to win this money, I would split the money into two parts. One is for my parents to pay the loan of house because the earlier you pay off the loan, the less money you will pay in total at the end. I want to help lighten the burden on my parents' shoulders.

The other part is the money for me to run a business. I plan to buy a street vendor in the nightmarket near my college. Then I can take good care of both studying and business because I just need to spare two or three nights in the nightmarket. What I plan to sell will amaze the world. My friend and I call it the Hunk set, in other words, a traditional grilled sausage with two pork balls on both sides at the bottom. The shape of it seems like a penis with two balls. The young students around the area will consider it funny and want to line up for purchasing it. At first, I will give customers discount if they upload the photos they are eating the Hunk set on the FB. Second if the Hunk set sell so well that I profits from it, I will apply for a patent for it. Then I'll consider about having a chain in other nightmarkets.

However, the main purpose is not aim to profiting but the experiment of running a business and working with good friends. Making the money becomes unforgettable memories is the way how I will spend the money gained from the jackpot.

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If I Won a Lottery Prize

Jerry Han – the freshman

If I were lucky enough to win a lottery prize, I would split the money into two parts. In order to help lighten the burden on my parents' shoulders, one is for them to pay the housing loan so that the earlier they pay off the loan, the less money in total they need to pay.

The other part is the money for myself to run a small business with my friends at a nightmarket near my college. My friend and I just need to spend two or three nights separately selling something at the nightmarket and the rest learning and studying at our school dormitory. What we plan to sell will amaze everyone. We call it Hunk set, a traditionally grilled sausage with two meatballs on both sides at one end. Its shape looks like an important thing of a man. The young students around will consider it funny and line up to buy it. We will start the business by offering discount to our customers if they upload photos they take when they are eating Hunk set to our store's FB. If the business is really good, the following important thing we will do is to come up with a plan to launch a chainstore business in major cities like Taichung, Tainan and Kaohsiung. However, the initial purpose for running this kind of business is not for making money but for gaining the business running experience and working with good friends.

But it sounds like a dream. Will the dream come true?