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學測指考英文寫作– At an Art Gallery (by 10^th grader)

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At an Art Gallery

Cherry Lee – the 10^th grader

Maggie is a girl who like art. One day, the nearby gallery had an exhibition of a famous artist's work. Maggie was interested in this and decided to take a look. Although there were lots of people, she tried to go front of the paint. Having a close look, she was knocked down by a man who is carrying a big bag suddenly. And the most serious thing is the paint was dropped down. The man not only didn't apologize to her but also leave quickly. Maggie was very angry about that, so she went on to argue with him. Amazingly, she found that the man's bag had a picture inside. She caught him as fast as possible. After the police came, she got a big praise for her achievement.

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At an Art Gallery

Cherry Lee – the 10^th grader

Maggie was a girl who liked art. One day, there was an exhibition of a famous artist's works at a nearby art gallery. She was interested in it and decided to take a look. Since there were lots of people flocking into the gallery, she tried very hard to stand in front of one of the paintings. When looking at that painting, she was suddenly pushed down to the floor by a man who carried a big backpack. What was even worse, the painting was pulled down by her while falling down. The man not only didn't apologize to her but also left quickly. So angry was she that she ran to catch up with him. To her surprise, she found that there was a paining hidden in his backpack. She seized him at once and informed the person in charge of the gallery who called the police without hesitation. After the police came, she received a lot of praises from the police and the gallery for her quick-wittedness and smartness in the situation of theft which just happened then.