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學測指考英文寫作 – A Cat in My Classroom (by 11th grader)

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A Cat in My Classroom

Yo Yo Ke – 11th grader

One day morning, Mrs. Wang, math teacher was teaching us how to solve the math question. A black shadow suddenly emerged from the window. Mrs. Wang screamed loudly while the shadow jump on the table and stood on it. We could see it was a cat clearly. All of us were exciting because we all knew teacher afraid of cats and we could play a trick on her. As I was laughing at Mrs. Wang, I found the cat was gazing at me. I felt something was strange, unexpectedly the cat rushed to me. How afraid I am! I screamed as loudly as Mrs. Wang and suddenly I discovered that the cat was licking me. The cat which was last Sunday I met was starving so I fed. What an amazing world. Its mouth held a piece of chocolate and put it on my table. What an unbelievable thing happened in the real world. All times I told to my friends they couldn't believe.

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A Cat in My Classroom

Yo Yo Ke – 11th grader

One morning, Mrs. Wang, our math teacher was teaching us how to solve an algebraic question. A black shadow suddenly emerged from a window. Mrs. Wang screamed loudly while the shadow jumped on her table. We could see it was a cat. All of us were excited because we all knew she was afraid of cats and we could play tricks on her. As I was laughing at her, I found the cat was gazing at me. I felt something strange. Unexpectedly it rushed to me. How afraid I was! I screamed as loudly as Mrs. Wang did. To my surprise, the cat licked my face. At the same time, it struck me that the black cat was the starving cat I met and I gave food to last Sunday at a park near our school. What an unbelievable thing happened in the real world. From that day on, I have told my friends and my family the story and held a belief that nothing comes from nothing.