學測指考英文寫作 – Rip Clothes in a Store (10th grader)

 

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Rip Clothes in a Store

Helen Huang – the 10th grader

 

Last Saturday afternoon, I went shopping with my friends in a department store. Strolling in the first floor, we saw varieties of new stuff and fancy clothes. All of a sudden, a white, printed cotton T-shirt, which quickly drew my attention, came into my site. I headed over to the store where the T-shirt was displayed, asking the clerk if I could try on. Excited and impatient, I didn't careful enough to notice the fact that the shirt wasn't my size. As a result, I tore the T-shirt accidently when trying on. Had I had not been so careless, I wouldn't have had to pay for my mistake. Much to my surprise, the clerk gave me a discount since I was a student. In spite of this, I was still regretful and depressed for buying a cute but useless clothes.

 

 

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Rip Clothes in a Store

Helen Huang – the 10th grader

 

Last Saturday afternoon, I went shopping with my friends in a department store. Strolling on the first floor, we saw varieties of new stuff and fancy clothes. All of a sudden, a white, printed cotton T-shirt, which quickly drew my attention, came into my site. I headed over to the store where the T-shirt was displayed, asking a clerk if I could try it on. Excited and hurried, I wasn't careful enough to notice that the shirt wasn't my size. As a result, the T-shirt was torn by me accidently when tried on. Had I had not been so careless, I wouldn't have had to pay the price for my carelessness and haste. Much to my surprise, the clerk gave me a discount since I was a student. Even so, I was still regretful and disappointed that I bought the cute but torn clothes.

 

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