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學測指考英文寫作 – A Dream - 1 (by 12^th grader)

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A Dream (by 12^th grader)

Hunter Wang – the 12^th grader

Everyone has a dream.  Someone wants to be a singer and someone wants to buy a house.  But, if you don’t work hard, your dream won’t come true.

I had a dream when I was a kid.  It was be the smartest student in my class.  I studied as hard as I could, but I always got the second or third in my class.  Because of this, I almost gave up to be the first.  But my brother told me to keep studying hard and I would get what I wanted someday.  Finally, at the final exam of grade five, I became the first in my class.  After this, I believe if you working hard, you will success some day.  But, if you don’t fight for your dream, it will never come true.

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A Dream (by 12^th grader)

Hunter Wang – the 12^th grader

Everyone has a dream.  Some want to be popular singers, while others want to buy a house.  But, if you don’t work hard, your dream won’t come true.

When I was a kid, I had a dream, being the smartest student in my class.  So I studied as hard as I could, but I always got the second or third in my class.  Because of this, I almost gave up being the first.  However, my brother told me to keep studying hard and I would get what I wanted someday.  Eventually, on the final exam of my fifth grade, I made it.  Afterward, I believe if you work hard, you will succeed one day.  But, if you don’t fight for your dream, it will never come true.