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Modern Food Delivery (by 8^th grader)

Michelle – the 8^th grader

With COVID-19 spreading around the world, not only can food delivery reduce close and frequent interaction among people.  This kind of food delivery service become a hit.  In Taiwan, there are many food delivery companies such as Uber Eats and Food Panda.  It is common that a person rides a scooter equipped with a large bag in front or at the back to deliver edible stuff including meals, snacks, and beverages.  Lying on the sofa and just touching the cellphone screen, I will get the food less than 30 minutes without going outside.  It is so convenient that people couldn’t help but be addicted to it.  With the terrible COVID-19 raging on some parts of the world, food delivery will keep on going and become a trend, which makes its business bloom.

One evening, I wanted to eat beef noodles at my favorite restaurant for dinner, but it had a heavy rain outside.  But I had difficulty eating the beef noodles without getting wet.  I hit on an idea that I can order the dish by using cellphone.  In the end, I ate the beef noodles happily and comfortably.  What a convenient service!

So useful is food delivery that I use it more frequently like most of the people.  After food delivery jumps on the bandwagon, the structure of the food industry must be change.  I think that there will be a kingdom of “food delivery” soon.

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Modern Food Delivery (by 8^th grader)

Michelle – the 8^th grader

With COVID-19 spreading all over the world, food delivery can not only reduce close and frequent interaction among people but provide its customers with food in a timely manner.  Within a short period of time, food delivery service turns out to be a hit.  In Taiwan, there are many food delivery companies such as Uber Eats and Food Panda.  It can be seen easily that on the streets, many deliverymen rush in and out by scooter equipped with a large bag in the front or at the back to deliver edible stuff including meals, snacks, and beverages.

One evening about two years ago, I was desperate to have beef noodles for lunch at my favorite restaurant, but I had problems eating out without drenching me to the skin because of a heavy rain outside.  Minutes later, I hit on an idea that I could have the dish through food delivery apps.  Lying on the sofa and using my smartphone to order, I got the beef noodles less than 30 minute and ate it with comfort.  Food delivery service is so convenient that many people get used to it.  With the terrible COVID-19 raging on in almost every region in the world, this kind of service will keep moving and become a trend, which makes its business grow and bloom.

So agreeable and pleasant is food delivery service that a lot of people jump on the bandwagon.  As it gets more and more favorable responses, it’s sure to come to be an inevitable and indispensible part in Food & Service Industry.  After all, the more customers it has, the more prevailing it becomes.  Over time, a more mature food delivery service comes into being.  In addition to its convenience, more benefits will be delivered to its customers.