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學測指考英文寫作 – Two Brand Name Cellphones

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Two Brand Name Cellphones (by 12^th grader)

Allen – the 12^th grader

From the chart, we can see that there are kinds of smartphones of two different brands, and they have some advantages and disadvantages respectively.  Brand A features in the camera, having high quality of images.  The second attractive fatures are its large screen and advanced working system.  However, if we choose brand A, we may have to give up some saving space and the lasting time of its battery.  Brand B is contrast to brand A, having large saving space and the longer last time of its battery.  Nevertheless, whether its quality of camera, the size of its screen, or its working system are less better than brand A, hence we should take these factors into consideration when buying the smarphone of brand B.

As me, I would rather choose the smartphone of brand A.  I am interested in taking photographs when I have leisure time.  Hence, I need a smartphone whose camera can take pictures of high quality.  Additionally, I need to modify and decorate my pictures sometimes, so the more advanced system is better for me.  Based on the two major reasons, I will buy the smartphone of brand A instead of that of brand B.

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Two Brand Name Cellphones (by 12^th grader)

Allen – the 12^th grader

From the charts, we can see there are two different brands of smartphones, and both of them have different features.  In regard to one of the features – camera, Brand A can produce high resolution pictures which really attract me.  Its second highlight is the larger screen which I can use to see things more clearly.    However, if I choose brand A instead of brand B, I may have smaller storage space and shorter battery-powered navigation.  Coincidentally, the opposite is true if I choose brand B.  It means that brand B has larger storage and longer battery-powered navigation while it has a smaller screen and generates lower resolution pictures.  When it comes to buying one for ourselves, all these features should be taken into consideration.  We can weigh up each factor and decide which one can meet our needs.

As for me, I would choose the smartphone of brand A rather than that of brand B.  Since I am interested in taking photographs in my leisure time, a smartphone with its camera able to take high resolution pictures is a must-have.  In this way, I can use some application software to do modification and decoration to come out some gorgeous and wonderful pictures.  With respect to the choice made by others, it varies for it is up to their needs and expectations.  After all, a smartphone is a very useful tool we need to use every day.  Only when it satisfies our requirements can we benefit greatly from it. 

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