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學測指考英文寫作 – After COVID-19 Broke out

 

 

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After COVID-19 Broke out (by 11th grader)

Doris – the 11th grader

 

After COVID-19 broke out, people need to wear masks at public places.

Tom used to take the MRT without wearing masks, however, he is required to wear a mask now when he goes out. There is no doubt that other passengers also need to wear their masks to protect themselves from getting infected with the pandemic.

 

 When Tom has a meeting with costumers, he will put on his masks and keep social distance with them. As long as the meeting is finished, he will disinfect the meeting room and wash his hands with soap. After all, he wants to make sure that the working environment is safe and clamed for and colleagues to work.

 

On the weekends, sometimes Tom will take his family to have outdoor activities, and they will wash their hands after coming back. Also they will try to avoid eating at restaurants. Instead, they will bring their own meals and eat at places where is nobody around.

 

I think that Tom's family is a great goal for us to imitate in a time when COVID-19 is in vogue. And for us, we can’t take safe environment for granted. We need to take time protecting ourselves.

 

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After COVID-19 Broke out (by 11th grader)

Doris – the 11th grader

 

After COVID-19 broke out, people need to wear masks at public places.  Tom used to take the MRT to work without wearing masks.  However, he is required to put on a mask before he goes out.  There is no doubt that other passengers also need to wear their masks to protect themselves from getting infected with the pandemic.

 

Whenever Tom has a meeting with costumers, he will put on his masks and keep social distance with them.  As long as the meeting finished, he will disinfect the meeting room and wash his hands with soap.  After all, he wants to make sure that the working environment is a clean and safe place for all the employees working there. 

 

On weekends, sometimes Tom and his family will have outdoor activities in which they won’t take off their masks until they get back home and wash their hands.  Also, they will try to avoid eating at restaurants.  Instead, they will bring their own meals which they can eat at the places where nobody is around.

 

I think that Tom's family is a great model for us to follow suit when COVID-19 is rampant all over the world.  Although we might consider Taiwan to be one of the safest places, we can’t take it for granted.  We still need to be in deadly earnest to work together to pay full attention to our health and safety.

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