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英文寫作 – Winter Is around the Corner

[ 學生原作 ]

Winter Is around the Corner

Hunter Wang – the ninth grader

The winter is coming. In four seasons, my favorite season is winter. The reason why I like winter is I like cold; I don’t like hot. The hot makes me sweat, and I can’t sleep well. Then I need to turn on the air-conditioner, and the bill of power is expensive. In winter, I don’t need to turn on the air-conditioner. I like the winter best although it is cold.

[ 修改 – 1 ]

Winter Is around the Corner

Hunter Wang – the ninth grader

The winter is coming. Among the four seasons, my favorite one is winter. The reason why I like winter is that I like coldness; I don’t like heat. The heat makes me sweat, and not sleep well. In addition, I need to turn on the air-conditioner, and the electricity bill will cost me a lot. In winter, I don’t need to turn on the air-conditioner. I like the winter best although it is cold.

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Winter Is around the Corner

Hunter Wang – the ninth grader

The winter is coming. Among the four seasons, my favorite one is winter. I like the coldness of winter. But I don’t like the heat of summer because it makes me sweat and not sleep well. In addition, in summer, I need to turn on the air-conditioner to cool me off. Then the electricity bill will cost me a lot. However, in winter, I don’t need to turn on the heater because it is not very cold to make me do so. Let me welcome its coming.