英文寫作 – After the Midterm

 

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After the Midterm

Hunter Wang – the ninth grader

 

After the midterm, I had a good news and a bad news. The good news was I could relax for a while. The bad news was I didn’t get the good grade in my exam. I thought about why I didn’t get the good grade in my exam, and I found out the answer that was I didn’t do enough exercises. So I made a plan. The plan was reviewing what the teacher said in that day. I hoped I could get the good grade in next time exam.

 

 

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After the Midterm

Hunter Wang – the ninth grader

 

After the midterm, I had good news and bad news. The good news was I could relax for a while. The bad news was I didn’t get good grades on my exam. I thought about why I didn’t get good grades on my exam, and the reason I found was that I didn’t do enough exercises. So I made a plan. The plan is to review what teachers say in class every school day. I hope I can get good grades on the next exam.

 

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