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英文寫作– What You Sow Is What You Reap

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What You Sow Is What You Reap

Simba Chang – the eighth grader

Life is fair, to reap without sowing is impossible.  Everyone desires to have a good result but most of them don’t pay enough effort, so they can’t be successful.  One day, my uncle sent us a case of bell fruit.  Mom told me they were different from general bell fruit, their name is black king kong.  I checked for a while.  I found they were bigger and sweater.  Having curiosity, I searched the Internet for why they can grow better.  If the farmers wanted to grow black king kong, they needed to keep a good temperature, humidity, and soil.  Sometimes, farmers even feed them milk.  The farmers spent such a long time and paid much cost on them.  No wonder black king kong could be world famous fruit.

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What You Sow Is What You Reap

Simba Chang – the eighth grader

Life is fair.  Reaping without sowing is impossible because people need to pay a lot of effort to realize their dream.  Everyone desires to have a good result but most of them don’t put in enough effort, so they can’t succeed.

One day, my uncle sent us a case of bell fruit.  Mom told me common bell fruit is different from it whose name is Black King Kong.  I took a look at the red fruit for a while.  I found they were bigger and sweeter.  Having curiosity, I got into the Internet browsing the related websites to look for the reason why they are palatable.  If the farmers want Black King Kong to grow better, they are in complete control of temperature, humidity, and soil.  Sometimes, farmers even feed them milk.  After spending a lot of time and money on the newly-bred fruit, Black King Kong will come in the shape, color, and taste as the farmers expect to have.  No wonder all Taiwanese love eating the juicy and sweet fruit.  I am sure it will become a famous fruit not only in Taiwan but also in the world.  It is worthwhile to have such a rewarding outcome, isn’t it?