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英文寫作– Practice Makes Perfect

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Practice Makes Perfect

Hunter Wang – the ninth grader

When I was seven years old, I liked to play tennis.  One day, I played with my cousin and I lost.  But I didn’t give up, I practiced playing tennis every day.  Although I practiced hard, I was still not good enough to beat him.  I decided to ask my friend to teach me tennis skills.  Several weeks later, I challenged my cousin.  At last, I won the game.  After that, I learned practice really makes perfect.

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Practice Makes Perfect

Hunter Wang – the ninth grader

When I was seven years old, I was fond of playing tennis.  One day, I played with my cousin and I lost the game.  But I was a boy who didn’t like to give up doing anything difficult.  In order to defeat my cousin, I decided to practice playing tennis every day.  Although I did it hard, I was still not good enough to outdo him.  I turned to my friend to ask him to teach me tennis skills.  Several weeks later, I challenged my cousin.  At last, I was happy that he was defeated by me.  After that, I learned something from playing tennis.  It proved that practice really makes perfect.  Now, “Practice Makes Perfect” becomes one of mottos.