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英文寫作 – What I Want to Be Ten Years Later  

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What I Want to Be Ten Years Later

Simba Chang – the 9^th grader

I don’t have a decided goal, but I am interested in basketball now.  To follow my interest, I want to be a basketball star ten years later.  As the old saying goes, “No pain, no gain.”  Therefore, before being a basketball star, I need to make a schedule of practicing basketball and do it conscientiously.  I will look at the basketball games to learn some skills and the good attitude about a basketball player.  In addition to these two points, there is a most important one which is playing with other.  Playing with other is very helpful for me to make a process, because I can learn other people’s excellence and find out my defect.  It is also a good chance to try the new skill I learn.  After doing those, I hope ten years later I can be what I expect now.

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What I Want to Be Ten Years Later

Simba Chang – the 9^th grader

I haven’t had a decided goal, but I am interested in playing basketball now.  To follow my interest, I want to be a basketball star ten years later.  As the old saying goes, “No pain, no gain.”  Therefore, before being a basketball star, I need to make a plan to practice basketball and do it conscientiously.  I will watch the basketball games to learn more skills and the attitude about being a good basketball player.  In addition, the most important thing I am required to do every week is to play basketball with others.  Playing with others is very helpful for me to make progress, because I can learn the strength from others and find out my weakness.  It is also a good chance to exercise the skill I learn.  After a lot of practice, I am sure I can mater it through untiring perseverance and resolute willpower.  With the plan carried into execution, I hope ten years later I can be what I expect to be now.