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學測指考英文寫作 – Having an Accident While Going Biking 

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Having an Accident While Going Biking

Yoyo Ke – the 11^th grader

Last Sunday morning, the weather was great.  So I decided to go biking along the riverbank.  I listened to MP3 and whistling with music.  Everything was fine until a girl change her aspect suddenly.  I had to avoid her so I braked.  Unlucky thing happened.  The ground was wet so I fell down and collided with bench.  After I woke up, I found I was in hospital.  Most of my body was covered with bandages.  What a bad day it was!

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Having an Accident While Going Biking

Yoyo Ke – the 11^th grader

Last Sunday morning, the weather was great.  I decided to go biking along the riverbank.  While cycling my bike, I listened to MP3 whistling to the music.  I was in a joyful mood because the sunshine was warm and the breeze was tender.  It seemed everything was fine until a girl beside me riding a small bike changed the lane suddenly.  In order to avoid hitting her, I put on the brake and steered the handle a bit right immediately.  But an unfortunate thing happened almost at the same time.  I bumped into a bench at my right-hand side seriously.  When I regained consciousness at night, I found I was lying in the hospital and most of body was wrapped with bandages.  Staring at the ceiling, I couldn’t imagine how it ended up like this.